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Title: Time stood still (we were moving too fast)
Pairing: Anne/Gil
Word Count: 1,091
Author's Note: Oh good God, people, I wrote something! This right here is what I like to call a miracle. Anyway, this is a response to this week's [livejournal.com profile] 15_minute_fic. It was more on the half an hour side of things, but by golly, that's still pretty fast for me!

Titles will forever be my downfall; I stole this one from And You Give by Matthew Barber, which has the same kind of summery bliss that I was feeling for this, and which makes my soul all fluttery in a way uncannily like Anne/Gil does, and truly, has there ever been anything else as sheerly lovely as that music video? O, an eternity of asjdflkdjf;a!


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It’s all the summer’s fault – if you can do a thing like blame a day as glorious as this one, and Anne can’t, not really. For oh, it’s such a beautiful day, the kind of day she can’t even put a word to because surely no one’s come up with one, or at least not yet. The sun beats boldly down over everything, and a breeze (she yearns to call it a zephyr, even if it’s not a west wind – it feels like a zephyr, feels far more divine than a plain old breeze, and that’s what’s important) teases the grass and the trees and your skin. The wind makes the leaves whisper things, mischievous little encouragements that suggest – no, insist that this is the very sort of day that must be savored, like last pages or fresh fruit, and this is why Anne (even though some – ‘some’ here taking on the voice of Mrs. Rachel Lynde – might say sixteen is too old for such nonsense) races Gil to the Andrews’ house on the way to the picnic. How thrilling it is to do it, too! They’re chums now, of course, she and Gil, but the second she starts running, she remembers just how much she liked competing with him for top marks in school. She imagines making it to the picnic first, breathing heavy and red-cheeked but triumphant, turning around just in time to watch him come in second. It will be even better, she’s sure, than scoring higher on a test; this, this is ever so much aliver than even that was—

She’s winning, and intends to keep it that way, ignoring Gil’s laughing protests from far off behind, but then she comes up against a barbed wire fence. She decides, after a split-second’s hasty deliberation, that she should be able to make it over if she’s careful, but then Gil calls, “I’ll leave you in the dust yet, Anne Shirley!” and that’s enough to catch her off-guard. Her palm slides thoughtlessly against one of the barbs and pain blooms there.

“Oh!” she exclaims, tears prickling as she looks at the cut. It isn’t too deep, but it hurts badly all the same. Her heart thunders in her chest; her feet tingle, still wanting to run.

“So you’ve chosen to forfeit? Wise move,” Gil is saying as he comes up next to her, but then he realizes what’s happened. “Anne, you’re hurt.”

He reaches for her hand, and is so sure as he does it. His fingers close around her wrist, and even the pain goes a little fuzzy. She wants to jerk away, and doesn’t quite understand why. She doesn’t, and doesn’t quite understand why.

“It isn’t bad,” she protests, hating how breathless she sounds. It’s only that it’s very undignified. She stands a little taller to make up for it. “And I’ll have you know I would have beaten you fair and square otherwise.”

“No argument there,” Gil agrees, chuckling a little as he glances up. He meets her eyes for a few seconds before returning his attention to her hand. She feels her hair against her throat, her face; a lot of it had fallen loose while she was running. She must look a terrible mess. She doesn’t like it, that one little glance from him can set her off worrying what she looks like. It doesn’t make any sense at all. “We’d better put some pressure on this.”

“Gil, I told you, it’s nothing.” The sun beats hot against her back; she wants to squirm, or maybe shiver. “We’re going to be late, and I absolutely promised Diana—”

He reaches into his pocket and pulls a handkerchief out. She’s struck by sudden and unforgivably foolish thoughts of court ladies giving their scarves to knights as tokens. Gilbert Blythe is her good friend, is a perfectly ordinary boy from Avonlea, and she refuses to so much as compare him to a valiant knight in shining armor. Refuses.

He’s careful but firm as he wraps the handkerchief around her hand, pressing two fingers against the wound with easy, effortless deliberation. She watches her blood sneak up through the white fabric. Neither of them say anything; they both stare down at his hand and hers, temporarily joined. The leaves whisper things, mischievous little encouragements.

“Your handkerchief’s ruined now,” she says, and for some reason her voice seems much louder than it is.

“Sacrificed for a good cause,” he replies amiably. “Just keep it there, all right?”

“All right.” She wishes she could think of something funny or playful to say. It’s as though her whole brain’s gone dry.

He pulls his fingers away. Her hand suddenly feels almost empty with lightness.

“Miss Shirley,” he says in pretend tones of gallantry (and if there’s one thing she knows, it’s that Gilbert Blythe isn’t really gallant – he’s far too much a normal boy for that, he just is), “might I beg the honor of escorting you to Jane Andrews’ picnic?”

“You may,” Anne replies primly, unable to keep from smiling all the way. He offers his arm, and she accepts it. “You know, Mr. Blythe, I think you may very well make a fair doctor someday.”

“I’m glad you think so,” he replies, sounding truly pleased. He looks right at her when he smiles. “You’re a good patient.”

Anne ignores the peculiar flutter that sparks, and insists that she is no such thing. They bicker comfortably the rest of the way to the picnic, where there’s lemonade and friends and blind man’s bluff and Josie Pye being as insufferable as ever, and after one round of concerned questioning about her hand, it’s easy to forget what happened on the way.

“Oh, Anne,” Diana positively swoons later after Anne tells her about it in tones that she’s sure to keep clipped and unremarkable. “He was so worried about you, and took such good care of you right away! I can’t even imagine how romantic it all must have been!”

“There’s nothing romantic about a childish race and a bloody handkerchief, Diana,” Anne says obstinately, and vows to throw the handkerchief out later to prove it. It is pure accident that Marilla happens to get the stain out. (Marilla has an unparalleled knack for getting stains out.) And if Anne folds it – maybe a little more carefully than one tends to fold handkerchiefs, the corners pressed gently together, overlapped like a kiss – and tucks it away in her dresser, well, then, it’s purely practical. One can never have too many handkerchiefs.


Date: 2009-03-26 07:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honey-wheeler.livejournal.com
And if Anne folds it – maybe a little more carefully than one tends to fold handkerchiefs, the corners pressed gently together, overlapped like a kiss – and tucks it away in her dresser, well, then, it’s purely practical. One can never have too many handkerchiefs.

Oh, Anne. Gosh, Anne and Gilbert still just get me where I live. Excellent. (and haha, Marilla so would be a genuis at stain removal)

Date: 2009-03-26 07:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Oh, man, Anne and Gil never go out of style. ♥ And Marilla so would be a genius at EVERYTHING! She is seriously just one of my favourite fictional characters of all time, I loooove her! Every time her practical spinstery heart melts a little bit thanks to Anne, be it in book or movie, it punches me right in the feelings. But in the nicest way possible.

Thanks for reading, buddy!

Date: 2009-03-26 10:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nikitembo.livejournal.com
OMG, YES.

The world needs more Anne/Gil.

AND THREE CHEERS FOR YOU, WRITING!

Date: 2009-03-26 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
The world needs more Anne/Gil.

TRUEST OF TRUE STORIES. Thanks for reading! :D

Date: 2009-03-26 11:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlgreytea68.livejournal.com
Aw, Anne and Gilbert! What a pleasant, beautiful surprise. Your writing style is so perfectly spot-on for this.

Date: 2009-03-26 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you very much! :)

Date: 2009-03-26 01:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vega-ofthe-lyre.livejournal.com
Oh, you! You've combined two of my favourite things: Anne/Gil and Matthew Barber (that vid has always made me so very gloriousy happy aksjlskjg) in the most PERFECT WAY POSSIBLE, the voice is just spectacular and oh, they're just so adorable in this! &hearts

Date: 2009-03-26 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
:D :D :D I am happy to bring on the joy, my friend! Thank youuuu!

Date: 2009-03-26 02:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] firthgal.livejournal.com
Oh man, this was absolutely delightful! I've never read Anne of Green Gables fic before, but good lord, this made me smile like a loon through the entire thing and it was just so, so, SO Anne that I felt such an affection for the prose. I can't even explain it. It's like the words were her, and I just wanted to hang out with the words forever and ever and be their bosom friend. Ooooh, the way she obsessed over wanting to call the wind a zephyr! The way she refused to acknowledge her fluttery feelings for Gilbert! And oh Gilbert. Oh how he stole my heart in this. Not that he didn't have it before, but still. You captured his sweetness and his glibness and his effortless yet frustrating love for Anne Shirley so beautifully. And I love the handkerchief moment and how it was completely simple yet so very romantic because it was Anne and Gilbert and Anne romanticizes everything, and yet she refuses to consciously romanticize anything Gilbert does, while at the same time she knows it's the most romantic thing in the world. I LOVED THIS! SO MUCH! Man, now I'm going to spend my whole day watching Anne of Green Gables, aren't I? I have a ton of stuff to do. *sigh* This is entirely your fault. &hearts

Date: 2009-03-26 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Awwwwww, thank you so much! :D You leave the best feedback, seriously!

Also, WATCH ANNE OF GREEN GABLES, WATCH IT. It is a much nobler pursuit than anything else anyone could EVER DO! This I know to be true.

Date: 2009-03-26 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibirhm.livejournal.com
ANNE/GIL IS LIKE MY CHILDHOOD OTP. OMG YOU WIN, HAVE ALL THE COOKIES IN THE WORLD.

Date: 2009-03-26 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Anne/Gil is everybody's childhood OTP! Gaaaaaah, I love them madly!

Thanks for reading, homes!

Date: 2009-03-26 03:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] littledivinity.livejournal.com
Nita, how do you do this? How do you always sound so PERFECTLY in character no matter who you're writing?

Jeez, this was so awesome. Anne is so Anne, with calling the wind a zephyr! And Gilbert is completely 100% Gilbert.

This was just SO perfect I am in awe.

Date: 2009-03-26 11:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you, homie g! :D :D :D

Date: 2009-03-26 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pepperjackcandy.livejournal.com
This was absolutely perfect!

I also got a giggle out of O, an eternity of asjdflkdjf;a! 8-D

Date: 2009-03-26 11:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
:D :D Thank youuu!

Date: 2009-03-27 04:07 am (UTC)
ext_41053: (aogg. a+g. dare you to dance with me.)
From: [identity profile] snowfire.livejournal.com
sdlaksaksa FLAIL. I THOUGHT I had seen A/G fic on my flist last night, but I didn't bookmark it and couldn't find it when I woke up this morning, so I became increasingly convinced I was crazy until I decided that if anyone had written it, it would be you! And look, you HAD!

And this is so perfect! Oh, Anne. Oh, Gil. You wrote them both so perfectly, Anne with her obstinate refusal to believe Gilbert is anything but a good chum - but still keeping the handkerchief! - and Gilbert's ... Gilbertness. I flailed!

(and now I'm going to reread the AoGG books. It's spring, I was going to anyway, but this makes me want to even more!)

Date: 2009-03-28 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Awwwww, thank you, buddy! :D I'm glad you found it again and did not succumb to craziness!

(Oh, gosh, I want to read them too! Forget you, school reading!)

Date: 2009-03-27 07:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] odakota-rose.livejournal.com
Oh, this is lovely.

Especially:
The sun beats boldly down over everything, and a breeze (she yearns to call it a zephyr, even if it’s not a west wind – it feels like a zephyr, feels far more divine than a plain old breeze, and that’s what’s important) teases the grass and the trees and your skin.

You captured that feeling perfectly, and reminded me of that air of wide eyed wonder and whimsy about this series. Great job!

Date: 2009-03-28 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you so much! :D

Date: 2009-03-29 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] athousandwinds.livejournal.com
Is it silly to say that this feels so romantic? But not overtly, just in the silences and the words unspoken - one can never have too many handkerchiefs.

Date: 2009-03-29 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you so much! That's totally what I was going for here, so I'm glad it worked. :)

Date: 2009-03-30 07:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hyacinthian.livejournal.com
I always bemoan the lack of Anne/Gilbert fic but this was just delightful! Fantastic!

And I love them, they are just so adorable!

Date: 2009-03-30 07:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D Man, the universe at large can always use more Anne/Gil. This I know to be true.

Date: 2009-05-03 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dansgrlx13.livejournal.com
It's absolutely adorable. And perfect!!! I loved it. I can't believe I hadn't found it until today. Great work!!! Have you written any others?

Date: 2009-05-03 09:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you so much! :D I haven't done any other Anne fic yet, but I definitely want to this summer.

Date: 2009-05-18 05:54 pm (UTC)
ext_23449: Book addict icon (shut up - AoGG)
From: [identity profile] idea-of-sarcasm.livejournal.com
It's amazing how I come across things in the most random of ways - but I am having a bit 'omg Anne of Green Gables fanfic' moment. And, well, it's near perfect. These were one of my earliest books, and I shipped Anne and Gil before I even knew what shipping was. I love your Anne - she sounds so much like the LM Mongtomery version of her.

I really want to reread the books now.

I hope you revisit the two of them again :)

Date: 2009-05-18 07:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you so much! :D I definitely want to write more about these two sometime; there is nothing as lovely as escaping into L.M. Montgomery land!!

Date: 2009-09-08 12:35 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] svmadelyn.livejournal.com
I had to see if you'd written any more of this pairing, and lo! You had! This too was lovely. ;)

Date: 2009-09-10 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Thank you muchly! :)

Date: 2009-09-09 11:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] abysmaltinkerer.livejournal.com
Here via the rec on crackvan, and I just had to tell you that I loved your little gem of a story. Anne/Gil makes my heart sing, and you have such a great voice with which to tell their stories.

Date: 2009-09-10 01:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you so much! :)

Date: 2009-09-10 09:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sakura-no-prey.livejournal.com
This was a wonderful little fic and read like it was actually a scene out of the books. I was actually just rereading Anne of Avonlea last night so this just hit me right at the perfect moment.

Date: 2009-09-11 12:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! :)

Date: 2009-09-10 10:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] helsinkibaby.livejournal.com
Here via crackvan and just wanted to tell you how much I loved this story. Very sweet and in character, and you have captured the tone of the books perfectly. Gorgeous!

Date: 2009-09-11 12:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you very much!

Date: 2009-09-27 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hoperomantic.livejournal.com
“There’s nothing romantic about a childish race and a bloody handkerchief, Diana,” Anne says obstinately, and vows to throw the handkerchief out later to prove it. It is pure accident that Marilla happens to get the stain out. (Marilla has an unparalleled knack for getting stains out.) And if Anne folds it – maybe a little more carefully than one tends to fold handkerchiefs, the corners pressed gently together, overlapped like a kiss – and tucks it away in her dresser, well, then, it’s purely practical. One can never have too many handkerchiefs.

What a perfect ending!

Date: 2009-09-29 12:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Why, thank you! :)

Date: 2009-10-04 06:44 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] celli
*heart*

Date: 2009-10-04 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
:D Thanks for reading!

Date: 2009-10-25 07:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] x-bohemienne.livejournal.com
OH EM GEE. Anne/Gilbert. This brings back the child in me, as I was obsessed with Anne as a kid. Heck, I even had a red wig. Great job.

Date: 2009-10-25 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Heck, I even had a red wig.

Hahaha, AWESOME. Anne of Green Gables was pretty much the center of my life when I was very little, and for some reason, with college came me rediscovering it and loving it more than ever. :D I like to think that it has improved me substantially as a human being.

Thanks so much for reading!

Date: 2011-03-11 02:15 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] anr
Lovely story! :) I really enjoyed reading this.

Date: 2011-03-11 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
I'm glad, thank you! :D

AHHH!!!

Date: 2011-07-17 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] staybeautifulhk.livejournal.com
I love love love love (etc) it!! Amazing!! SOoo romantic!! Keep it up!! Now ima go watch AoGG again, and reread the books asap :)... Stay beautiful!! :D

Date: 2013-06-08 01:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jmetropolis.livejournal.com
I loved this! I love how in denial she is about her feelings and her careful folding of the handkerchief is my favorite part about it.

Date: 2013-06-08 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

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