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[dollsome]

Whoohoo, tiny fanfics!

For leobrat--



And there is a fascination that she wishes she could extinguish: the accidental contemplation of his hands, the quick raw yearning that singes her skin when his eyes are on her. She takes to watching his mouth, an idle new envy of the words that form on his tongue. He did kiss her once, and she dimly recalls the dread, the queer chastity of it. She nearly misses the girl she was then, the one who dutifully recoiled because she knew she had no other choice. The blacks and whites have since begun to bleed.

Now, she deftly weaves her way between deception and this thing she will not name – true liking? flirtation? desire? – and half-hopes all the while that she might slip.

He would catch her, she knows.

Comments

[littledivinity.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is just...delicious is actually the first word that came to mind. It's just absolutely gorgeous, my dear.

She takes to watching his mouth, an idle new envy of the words that form on his tongue.

Guh.

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

Why, thank you, lady! :D

I sometimes think I need to be writing more about these two. It would feel slightly more productive than freaking out until my brain breaks.

. . . and yet they make fangirly spazzing seem HIGHLY IMPORTANT.

[loveknot.livejournal.com]

I am a hundred percent sure that your "productive" mood icon is the best thing I've ever seen. xD

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

Hee! I am pleased to strike such awe within your heart. :)

[askmehow.livejournal.com]

Eeeeee! Just lovely.

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :)

[slytherin-gypsy.livejournal.com]

Truly fantastic!

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

Thank you muchly!

[tray-lord.livejournal.com]

*squee* ^_^

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

:D :D Thanks for reading!

[snowystingray.livejournal.com]

The cockles of my heart, they are greatly warmed.

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

Glad to have done so, my friend. :D Thanks for reading!

[herdivineshadow]

She takes to watching his mouth, an idle new envy of the words that form on his tongue.


I suspect, that this line along with Richard Armitage himself, is to blame for this.


I also suggest, that you click the link and listen to the file while reading it too.


And maybe, if you have a weakness for a certain Mr Armitage, make sure you're sitting down first.

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

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Richard Armitage, what are we to do with you, you gorgeous man??

Thanks for reading. :D

[herdivineshadow]

Richard Armitage, what are we to do with you, you gorgeous man??


I'm sure we could think of something.


Including making him read the phone book to us.

[artemis-issoria.livejournal.com]

oh beautiful! i love it.

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much! :)

[izzet_engineer]

Beautiful...just beautiful

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[guyxmarianluv.livejournal.com]

Ohhh, **squee**

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

:D :D Thank you!

[iwillrememberu.livejournal.com]

Beautiful drabble!

She takes to watching his mouth, an idle new envy of the words that form on his tongue.

*gulps*

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much. :)

[literateur.livejournal.com]

B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It made me go all tingly inside ^^

Yes. Indeed.

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

Awwwww, thank you! :) :)

[leobrat.livejournal.com]

Claps hands! Yay, thank you so much for writing this!

I've been lurking at guyxmarian, and your enthusiasm is wonderful! I'm still only on the beginning of season 1 (NaNoWriMo got in the way), but G/M totally sucked me in from the pilot. As Rhett Butler once said, "I cannot resist a lost cause, once it is truly lost." Sigh.

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

Thanks for liking it!

"I cannot resist a lost cause, once it is truly lost." Oh man, I think I need to get that put on a t-shirt or something. :)

[gimmemypickle.livejournal.com]

He did kiss her once, and she dimly recalls the dread, the queer chastity of it. She nearly misses the girl she was then, the one who dutifully recoiled because she knew she had no other choice. The blacks and whites have since begun to bleed.

I love you for writing this! This is AMAZING and so believable.

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank you so much! :)

[amandajane17.livejournal.com]

Oh yes the voice of the divine Mr A has to be heard to be believed *swoons*
I'm convinced that if Robin hadn't been seen at the window we might well have seen Marian 'give herself' to Guy ( Damn these family show limitations).

[feministyogini.livejournal.com]

I'm a few months into RH fandom and was happy to see you're writing guy/marian fic because I love your Office fic too :)

The blacks and whites have since begun to bleed.

I love this line because you're right - by S2, Marian had grown up quite a bit and was drawn much more to Guy.

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[ladykate63.livejournal.com]

Short but sweet! you really should write more G/M.

[dollsome.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :)

[ladykate63.livejournal.com]

You're very welcome! let me know if there's any other encouragement you need. :D

[ladykate63.livejournal.com]

LOL, I just opened this and was going to leave a commment saying "How lovely -- you need to write more G/M" ... only to see that I already did say almost exactly that! :D

But hey, extra feedback can't hurt, right?