The whole thing was brilliant and that final scene was just inspired. I still say you could sell this, the quality is that high. It's funny enough that I was laughing out loud, but there were so many touching moments that it gave the whole thing a really special, balanced feeling. This would have been some really good television.
If you feel inspired again, I would love to read another episode someday. Thanks for sharing this.
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Date: 2008-11-24 01:50 am (UTC)The whole thing was brilliant and that final scene was just inspired. I still say you could sell this, the quality is that high. It's funny enough that I was laughing out loud, but there were so many touching moments that it gave the whole thing a really special, balanced feeling. This would have been some really good television.
If you feel inspired again, I would love to read another episode someday. Thanks for sharing this.