This is an amazingly perceptive take on Marian's side of things... I like how she has tried to keep her distance but at the same time knows exactly what she is doing to him. Having her wishing for the simpler beginnings of his "courting" of her was fascinating as well.
The bit where he asks for her forgiveness was SO well done... I could see it happening just that way. It was a "this could be canon" kind of scene.
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Date: 2009-01-19 07:29 pm (UTC)The bit where he asks for her forgiveness was SO well done... I could see it happening just that way. It was a "this could be canon" kind of scene.