I think that is my favorite line of the whole fic! I loved Rory's teasing at the end of the first scene.
Love the Pretty Woman reference.
HA! Kirk has 40 dollars to spend in a kissing booth. Speaking of Kirk, you have his characterization perfectly down to pat. Actually, forget Kirk, that applies to everyone. This is perfect.
The air-kisses were hilarious and SO something Lorelai would do.
Give her a break. She’s caffeine-deprived. LOL!
Aw, it's just like Luke to come over when Rory's sick. He has to take care of his girls. :)
He’s looking at her in that way that they like to pretend they don’t look at each other. Possibly this isn’t smart.
I take it back. This was my favorite line of the fic. It just sums up the whole early L/L relationship perfectly. *sigh* ♥
Faintly tipsy - haha! I love drunk!Lorelai. :D
LOL! Unwrapping a Starburst with your tongue! Wow, I haven't done that in forever.
That whole scene was hilarious, with just the right touch of romance. I love Luke's denial.
She does stupid, stupid things to him. Great line. So Luke.
Haha! Kirk doing the Macarena. Now there's a visual for you.
...this part of her – this big, big part of her, this part that could almost be considered a whole part, an all-of-her part – that doesn’t want to be pulling away.
Since I've already declared two previous lines to be my favorites, I guess I can't do it again...but this one comes awfully close! It was just so...Lorelai. I don't know how else to explain it.
Their New Years kiss was perfect.
Yay for Buffy references!
All in all, this fic was fantastic! I'm adding it to my mems. ♥
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Date: 2007-10-21 04:53 am (UTC)Since when is mistletoe a health hazard?
I think that is my favorite line of the whole fic! I loved Rory's teasing at the end of the first scene.
Love the Pretty Woman reference.
HA! Kirk has 40 dollars to spend in a kissing booth. Speaking of Kirk, you have his characterization perfectly down to pat. Actually, forget Kirk, that applies to everyone. This is perfect.
The air-kisses were hilarious and SO something Lorelai would do.
Give her a break. She’s caffeine-deprived. LOL!
Aw, it's just like Luke to come over when Rory's sick. He has to take care of his girls. :)
He’s looking at her in that way that they like to pretend they don’t look at each other. Possibly this isn’t smart.
I take it back. This was my favorite line of the fic. It just sums up the whole early L/L relationship perfectly. *sigh* ♥
Faintly tipsy - haha! I love drunk!Lorelai. :D
LOL! Unwrapping a Starburst with your tongue! Wow, I haven't done that in forever.
That whole scene was hilarious, with just the right touch of romance. I love Luke's denial.
She does stupid, stupid things to him. Great line. So Luke.
Haha! Kirk doing the Macarena. Now there's a visual for you.
...this part of her – this big, big part of her, this part that could almost be considered a whole part, an all-of-her part – that doesn’t want to be pulling away.
Since I've already declared two previous lines to be my favorites, I guess I can't do it again...but this one comes awfully close! It was just so...Lorelai. I don't know how else to explain it.
Their New Years kiss was perfect.
Yay for Buffy references!
All in all, this fic was fantastic! I'm adding it to my mems. ♥
Amazing job.