Hi, I know I'm a new reviewer, but I totally loved your story!You got Andy's voice down so pat! This part
“It’s chivalrous,” Andy says, and there’s her good old friend the kicked puppy face.
“Chivalry’s dead,” she snaps.
“Wait, wait, I know this one,” Andy says, holding up a finger. “But I’m still kinda cute?” He grins at her, like he deserves a reward for working Nelly Furtado into casual conversation.
Was absolutely PERFECT. Andy would try to score points with Kelly by trying to insert pop songs into conversation! I absolutely adored it. Andy/Kelly is turning into one of my favorite pairings!
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Date: 2007-06-21 10:09 pm (UTC)“It’s chivalrous,” Andy says, and there’s her good old friend the kicked puppy face.
“Chivalry’s dead,” she snaps.
“Wait, wait, I know this one,” Andy says, holding up a finger. “But I’m still kinda cute?” He grins at her, like he deserves a reward for working Nelly Furtado into casual conversation.
Was absolutely PERFECT. Andy would try to score points with Kelly by trying to insert pop songs into conversation! I absolutely adored it. Andy/Kelly is turning into one of my favorite pairings!