Followed the link from TWoP and I was amazed (again) by your skill. I love the way you write Ryan and Kelly. Toby’s whole section was great, because this part broke my heart: *He wants to tell her he knows what it’s like, to think you’ve got your life all figured out and warm and comfortable only to have everything just be gone, like that.* And this part made me laugh like a drain: *He’s distracted by the fact that Angela will very probably see to it that Andy winds up dead in a dumpster. He guesses he should do something about it, but honestly, he’s pretty okay with the idea.* And Karen figuring out about Jim’s real feelings. And Jan wanting to hug Michael (love!) and telling him she’ll stick around and then: *Not to mention that she’s pretty sure the reason she can’t find her black bra is because it’s at his condo.* Ha!
And this line: *“I’d do it again,” he says, his tone lit by quiet fierceness. “A thousand million times.”* I seriously had a lump in my throat. You wrote all of these characters beautifully and truthfully, as always. I am in awe.
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Date: 2007-01-15 12:54 am (UTC)And this line: *“I’d do it again,” he says, his tone lit by quiet fierceness. “A thousand million times.”* I seriously had a lump in my throat. You wrote all of these characters beautifully and truthfully, as always. I am in awe.
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