Oh man, this is great - you totally nailed all the characters incredibly well, and it was really funny. My roommate read it about 15 minutes before I did, and kept laughing and reading parts out to me. (GOD, STOP SPOILING ME FOR FANDOM. Heeeee.)
Well, he just doesn’t want to break up with her. Although in moments like these he really feels like he should want to. He kind of misses that feeling. But not enough to want it back, either.
HEE. Oh, Ryan.
“Gould is stupid,” he says, and carefully brushes her hair out of her face. “Seriously. I’m willing to bet good money that he’s actually a little bit mentally retarded.”
Ahahahahahahaha.
Seriously, so many awesome parts I can't quote them all.
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Date: 2007-01-09 04:00 am (UTC)Well, he just doesn’t want to break up with her. Although in moments like these he really feels like he should want to. He kind of misses that feeling. But not enough to want it back, either.
HEE. Oh, Ryan.
“Gould is stupid,” he says, and carefully brushes her hair out of her face. “Seriously. I’m willing to bet good money that he’s actually a little bit mentally retarded.”
Ahahahahahahaha.
Seriously, so many awesome parts I can't quote them all.