verrry nice. wonderfully in character, and so believable.
i loved these lines: apples aren’t pink, which is just like . . . he doesn’t even know oh god, could that be anymore Ruyan? I actualy laughed out loud.
“We don’t have to stay here all night,” Toby says courteously after a few minutes have slipped by, sand-in-an-hourglass style (she dreads going home to an empty apartment, going to work on Monday, seeing Jim with Karen and remembering that this is what grown-up life has to offer). Oh my dear sweet Toby, and poor Pam :/
“Then you wouldn’t understand,” he informs her darkly. Heehe, so Dwight!
I also *loved* the Jim/Karen bit, with him "trying to get there" and hating himself for thinking of Pam.
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Date: 2007-01-09 03:30 am (UTC)i loved these lines:
apples aren’t pink, which is just like . . . he doesn’t even know
oh god, could that be anymore Ruyan? I actualy laughed out loud.
“We don’t have to stay here all night,” Toby says courteously after a few minutes have slipped by, sand-in-an-hourglass style (she dreads going home to an empty apartment, going to work on Monday, seeing Jim with Karen and remembering that this is what grown-up life has to offer).
Oh my dear sweet Toby, and poor Pam :/
“Then you wouldn’t understand,” he informs her darkly.
Heehe, so Dwight!
I also *loved* the Jim/Karen bit, with him "trying to get there" and hating himself for thinking of Pam.