dollsome

Wow this was amazing. You took a really short scene (one of my all time favorites) and wrote only a little but said so much! I loved it!!!!!! I loved the bit: "Agravaine again. She wonders if the day will ever come when it is anyone else." Because I'm sure that is what she feels this season, since he really is her only companion now. But my FAVORITE part had to be when she was talking to Agravaine at the end and after each sentence you incorporated one of her earlier ones. It was so powerful. Especially: "there you see arthur you've met your match" "you're dead (you wish)" and "Pulling him to his feet, so that he might stand beside her. Can you feel that? she wonders, stupidly, and ought to hope he doesn’t." basically i loved it!!!!!!!!! Xx