Second to last line from Troy made me laugh so hard. I could hear his voice so clearly in my head. Great job catching the awkwardness. I also usually agree with the one pov rule, but it worked really well in this story. I loved the purposeful jumping back and forth. Brilliant!
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Date: 2010-08-01 07:18 am (UTC)