Ah, this is perfect! I'm trying to write my own D/D Epitaph fic at the moment, and once again-- blown out of the water.
I really like how they're not...hating each other. Like they just accept it and move on sort of thing. I don't know.
One of these days, he decides, he’s going to kiss her. Before he leaves again. That way, he’ll have the memory to carry around with him, even if he doesn’t make it back.
And I really liked the sort of simplicity of those lines. That he's not too fussed about whether he makes it back or not-- not quite that, but I'm not sure how else to describe it.
And that he brings Adelle tea! (Though in my mind, she drinks Earl Grey. English Breakfast is for pansies who don't know the taste of real tea.) But that, because she's using a tea bag, it's the end of the world. Brilliant! :)
I also really liked how Dominic says 'like' so much. I don't know, makes him seem more...human or relate-able or something.
And...this comment is really just a jumble of thoughts. I really liked it, it was a nice quick, cute read. I'm glad I decided to check my flist one more time before going to bed!
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Date: 2010-03-19 10:23 am (UTC)I really like how they're not...hating each other. Like they just accept it and move on sort of thing. I don't know.
One of these days, he decides, he’s going to kiss her. Before he leaves again. That way, he’ll have the memory to carry around with him, even if he doesn’t make it back.
And I really liked the sort of simplicity of those lines. That he's not too fussed about whether he makes it back or not-- not quite that, but I'm not sure how else to describe it.
And that he brings Adelle tea! (Though in my mind, she drinks Earl Grey. English Breakfast is for pansies who don't know the taste of real tea.) But that, because she's using a tea bag, it's the end of the world. Brilliant! :)
I also really liked how Dominic says 'like' so much. I don't know, makes him seem more...human or relate-able or something.
And...this comment is really just a jumble of thoughts. I really liked it, it was a nice quick, cute read. I'm glad I decided to check my flist one more time before going to bed!