I still fondly remember the fics I read by you ages ago, so when I saw you had posted J/E now, I was delighted :-)
I agree, that poem really fits. You've conveyed her situation so well, with such lovely writing, and it feels real, it makes my heart ache for her, like here: I was a pirate king, she wants to say aloud... I love the mention of Norrington, Jack and Elizabeth's interaction, King Elizabeth the Second as well as their sentences twining into one another’s with so much ease and mischief and grace, their hands and mouths and limbs wanting so badly to follow suit. And I love your Elizabeth, no blasted damsel, not even here and now. Beautiful ending lines, too. This goes straight to my memories!
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Date: 2010-01-06 12:36 am (UTC)I agree, that poem really fits. You've conveyed her situation so well, with such lovely writing, and it feels real, it makes my heart ache for her, like here: I was a pirate king, she wants to say aloud... I love the mention of Norrington, Jack and Elizabeth's interaction, King Elizabeth the Second as well as their sentences twining into one another’s with so much ease and mischief and grace, their hands and mouths and limbs wanting so badly to follow suit. And I love your Elizabeth, no blasted damsel, not even here and now. Beautiful ending lines, too. This goes straight to my memories!