Great character voice. It's so Sawyer, but especially it's perfectly early season one Sawyer, who we haven't seen in quite awhile - I'm impressed and a little awed you were able to evoke him so well.
There's a nice dreamy, weary, hazy feeling about the whole chain of events. I don't know if that makes any sense...but it feels right.
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Date: 2009-05-16 09:19 pm (UTC)There's a nice dreamy, weary, hazy feeling about the whole chain of events. I don't know if that makes any sense...but it feels right.