THIS IS SO FRIGGIN AWESOME. I was so excited when I saw you'd written more fic (not that any fic could top "Sleepover" of course but). And this is just amazingly perfect. The Kelly voice is spot on, not just the themes and expressions but the rhythm of it, it just feels right. The whole opening with the Lord of the Rings rant has just made my day. And of course Kelly wouldn't get Arrested Development.
I really cannot express how much I absolutely adore this, so I totally FAIL at feedback.
My favourite bit was Kelly fantasizing about writing the memoir of her relationship with Ryan and then it getting turned into a movie and... Yes, that part. ♥
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Date: 2009-03-17 05:27 am (UTC)I really cannot express how much I absolutely adore this, so I totally FAIL at feedback.
My favourite bit was Kelly fantasizing about writing the memoir of her relationship with Ryan and then it getting turned into a movie and... Yes, that part. ♥