Oh, Nita. Nita, Nita, Nita. This is just...amazing. It's just absolutely gorgeous.
And I love faint the suggestion is that Marian might feel for him, might want to feel for him, but it's all very buried under her dislike. And Gah! IT IS SO GOOD.
And Guyyyyyyyy. Oh, this Guy is so perfect. I just absolutely love it. You have everything that makes him a sympathetic character, but his gaze still lingers a little too long, he's still just a little too forward every now and then.
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Date: 2007-11-29 01:40 am (UTC)And I love faint the suggestion is that Marian might feel for him, might want to feel for him, but it's all very buried under her dislike. And Gah! IT IS SO GOOD.
And Guyyyyyyyy. Oh, this Guy is so perfect. I just absolutely love it. You have everything that makes him a sympathetic character, but his gaze still lingers a little too long, he's still just a little too forward every now and then.
It's just awesome.