Date: 2007-10-21 05:32 am (UTC)
Simply beautiful! The characterization couldn't be better, and this last line

He pretends not to feel her eyes on him as he storms out, or to hear the sigh she breathes at the slamming of the door. They are things he might have cherished, once.

is so powerful. I hope to see more from you!
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