It's sad and sweet and it makes me want to sing with joy and sadness. I love how you tie it together, how the beginning is the end and vice versa, and how while chronologically things get worse before they get better, in your story the strings are at first tied together before they are cut and forced to unravel.
I don't know. That didn't make much sense. But this is beautiful and I don't know how many S/R + R/T stories I've read that could be considered as gorgeous as this. FANTASTIC job.
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Date: 2010-04-15 03:30 am (UTC)It's sad and sweet and it makes me want to sing with joy and sadness. I love how you tie it together, how the beginning is the end and vice versa, and how while chronologically things get worse before they get better, in your story the strings are at first tied together before they are cut and forced to unravel.
I don't know. That didn't make much sense. But this is beautiful and I don't know how many S/R + R/T stories I've read that could be considered as gorgeous as this. FANTASTIC job.