I... laughed really loudly at this... at various parts. Very well written. As everyone else said you captured the voices fantastically and also did a nice job of sliding extra humor in (such as the Toby stuff) without making it seem contrived. Good on you.
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Date: 2006-10-21 06:00 am (UTC)