ok, first of all, i don't know anything about hunger games. second of all, LOVED THIS. i just LOVE your sentences and their rhythm and the words you use and everything.
favorite parts:
He always thought, freedom is a luxury we can't afford, but instead of saying it ran his fingers through the scruff at the base of her neck, a beautiful dusky dark brown, murmured, "I'll keep you safe."
and
Except:
There is a small dark wolf, all sharp green eyes and sharper white teeth.
He stares at her and growls her name - Clove - which is a scent, which is as close as he has ever come to love.
She dips her head to his throat and blinks, three times,
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Date: 2012-10-11 01:32 am (UTC)second of all, LOVED THIS. i just LOVE your sentences and their rhythm and the words you use and everything.
favorite parts:
He always thought, freedom is a luxury we can't afford, but instead of saying it ran his fingers through the scruff at the base of her neck, a beautiful dusky dark brown, murmured, "I'll keep you safe."
and
Except:
There is a small dark wolf, all sharp green eyes and sharper white teeth.
He stares at her and growls her name - Clove - which is a scent, which is as close as he has ever come to love.
She dips her head to his throat and blinks, three times,
and rips it out.