This is seriously everything that I love about this ship, thank you so much for writing. Your Amanda POV is so sharp and constantly reassessing, moving, dealing, not dealing ... really stunning. I also love moments like this:
She opens her freezer and Amanda follows the line of her spine as she bends over, wants to count the knobs, slot her fingers between them and press and press and press until Emily squirms under the touch.
where it becomes both so clearly sexual and so clearly possessive and violent at the same time. It's the perfect vibe for them. And the ending lines are also especially killer.
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Date: 2012-06-26 05:32 am (UTC)She opens her freezer and Amanda follows the line of her spine as she bends over, wants to count the knobs, slot her fingers between them and press and press and press until Emily squirms under the touch.
where it becomes both so clearly sexual and so clearly possessive and violent at the same time. It's the perfect vibe for them. And the ending lines are also especially killer.