Ok, so firstly, you're an extremel good writer and I'm supremely jealous. For example, this line: and Annie looks up from her notebook at him with her big brown eyes, her mouth a little open like she means to be talking but the words (like their study group) won’t show up, and God— is just so well-made. How?? How do you do it.
And also: ‘It’s no big deal’ is what he means to say, but she looks so happy and so normal that what he says instead is, “We kissed.”
SHIT, thinks Jeff.
OH GOSH, thinks Annie.
AND...she’s only written the date and even the corners of her numbers seem to curve unusually, hopefully, like today is meant to be different. That "GOSH" just seals the deal.
Ok, I gotta stop quoting you so much but d you realize how beautiful your writing is?? Do you??? I think I'm going to study this fic and tke notes. So glad I followed your skate fics and can now proudly follow your Jeff/Annie fics. Please make more! (preferbl with secret sexy times they try to hide from the group. y/y?)
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Date: 2010-08-01 03:19 am (UTC)And also:
‘It’s no big deal’ is what he means to say, but she looks so happy and so normal that what he says instead is, “We kissed.”
SHIT, thinks Jeff.
OH GOSH, thinks Annie.
AND...she’s only written the date and even the corners of her numbers seem to curve unusually, hopefully, like today is meant to be different.
That "GOSH" just seals the deal.
Ok, I gotta stop quoting you so much but d you realize how beautiful your writing is?? Do you??? I think I'm going to study this fic and tke notes.
So glad I followed your skate fics and can now proudly follow your Jeff/Annie fics. Please make more! (preferbl with secret sexy times they try to hide from the group. y/y?)