I don't know how I feel about you making Twilight into something I would want to read. I'm a little disconcerted. It's not ever supposed to have beautiful sentences like She never told him or anything, because she knew it’d spook him, but she might have liked him like that the best: when there was that little hint of monster in his face, when she could tell that he was listening to the thud of her pulse way too close.
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Date: 2010-07-02 10:01 pm (UTC)Also mentioning Miss Havisham. A+++