It never ceases to amaze me how beautifully you write these two. I love how settled they are here, how they're letting their guard down, but she's still carrying this guilt (always will) and he doesn't try to stop her which is felt so real.
And this:
One of these days, he decides, he’s going to kiss her. Before he leaves again. That way, he’ll have the memory to carry around with him, even if he doesn’t make it back.
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Date: 2010-03-21 02:20 am (UTC)It never ceases to amaze me how beautifully you write these two. I love how settled they are here, how they're letting their guard down, but she's still carrying this guilt (always will) and he doesn't try to stop her which is felt so real.
And this:
One of these days, he decides, he’s going to kiss her. Before he leaves again. That way, he’ll have the memory to carry around with him, even if he doesn’t make it back.
Beautiful, beautiful fic.