OH MAN, writing Topher in this was THE HARDEST THING I HAVE DONE IN RECENT MEMORY. I love that you have to read out loud and do the Topher-arms! In fact, that's a genius approach. I would, like, force the words out and, every five words or so, go, "Okay. Okay. It is doable to imagine Fran saying this. Sort of. I think. Oh, Fran, why can't you just be saying this and that way it would seem Topherish by default?!?!" So, er, in short, I'm glad that this worked even a little bit. I was super-uncertain about writing him.
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Date: 2010-01-24 05:39 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading!