ext_111705 ([identity profile] crimson-riddler.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2008-11-10 05:30 am (UTC)

Very nice. You really captured Arthur's reluctance to think of her in that way, and also his momentary blank: OMG HER LIPS ARE GORGEOUS - but in a slightly more articulate and elegant form. ;)

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