I'm a HUGE fan of Toby and Pam, so much so that I too took a stab at fanfiction for them. This was so sweet and just as sad. I know that they'll never be together, but it's nice to think they good be in their own way. At any rate, great for them. You didn't make Toby creepy like they have on the show recently, yet you still made me love JAM and POBY! Great job!