ext_43872 ([identity profile] three-nails.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2007-11-29 01:40 am (UTC)

When he does go, she remains standing still. She does not watch him leave; just listens to the shutting of the door. For a short while, it is not followed by the sound of retreating footsteps. She does not realize she is holding her breath until finally she hears the dull thud of him walking away, and exhales.
I liked that part =].

This was great! =D

And school work, psh, who does that anymore?!

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