ext_46689 ([identity profile] greenfish.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2007-10-06 01:23 am (UTC)

This was really neat. You really captured Angela very well. The bit about the frozen vegetables, and Mose surviving a ninja attack, wow. I also really liked how you tied in the bit about Mose's dog.

This was a nice little story! I love getting to read about the supporting characters. And seriously. I can't believe how well you captured Angela.

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