This is just. Stunning. Everything is perfect. It's exactly how I imagined it. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. I just. I wish I could think of better words to describe how much I love this. This makes everything that happened in Deathly Hallows so right, you know? Or wrong. I mean -- it makes it okay. I love this glimpse into Remus's feelings throughout the novel, because it makes me understand him better, and it makes me feel bad for the situation both he and Tonk are in. Anyway, you jut did a brilliant job, I your writing style, and I love that the story is told in reverse. I just love this. <3