ext_2124 ([identity profile] anoel.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2007-01-20 11:00 pm (UTC)

Wow this is amazing! I am all a-flail over the Michael/Jan scene which was made of cuteness and so them. Not to say that the other pairings weren't spot on perfect but the Michael/Jan parts are made of glee. I adore the Whose Line and Ryan Stiles reference (fandom collusion squee) and it really is so Michael to be referencing it and made me laugh when he assumed that's what Jan was talking about. I love how Jan rings the doorbell once and then more than once-like she knows he wouldn't care and it'd motivate him to answer it anyway. "because he's allowed to" Hee! He's such a child. The cigarette is a nice touch, perfect as she always does it when she's upset and I love how he says he wants her to quit like he wants her to just be happy with their relationship.

“Embraced the love that formerly dared not speak its name?” Michael offers. Hee! Soo Michael. That whole dialogue was awesome and I love her pause and their differing view on the relationship. And then the "ooh" and "Did you get anything?" was hilarious and too Michael. I love how she opens up to Michael about her ex just like she did in The Client. Ilove Michael defending Jan with the mentally retarded line, just like the Craig thing in Valentine's Day. In the way of romance,” Michael insists, “Gould is special ed. Because you are the most amazing woman in the world, and if he doesn’t see that . . .” He considers it for a moment. “Well, actually, it’s a really good thing, because otherwise you’d still be married to him and I wouldn’t get to have you all to myself.” Awwww so cute! And then I looove the "obscurely true" line where he accidently said the wrong thing. The end with "Pick a different movie" is so them and yet still makes me heart Michael with all the love I can muster. Seriously, SO GOOD!

The Ryan/Kelly parts were so cute with her fangirlness over POTC and the OT3 pairing comparison with Jim/Pam/Roy. You had Kelly's voice perfectly and for once, I enjoyed them. Dwight/Angela was made of awesome. The burglar thing was oh so Dwight and cute in their weird way. I *love* Dwight reading HBP for the fourth time and hiding it from her. Do you ever feel,” he whispers, “that maybe, if you read the Bible enough times, eventually Jesus won’t wind up dying, and instead he and the disciples will live happily ever after?” This is the best line ever because it's the best comparison of those that I've ever seen and so cute! Gah, I love this fic!

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