Can I quote the whole thing back to you? Because really, this entire thing was so spot on which I realize might be redundant feedback for you at this point, but seriously I can't think of a single misstep in this fic! Parts that made me go GUH: "I might be getting there" not a sufficient answer, Jack/Elizabeth/Will=Jim/Pam/Roy hahaha!, She looks sort of crazy because I was sort of thinking the same thing in BfV, Harry Potter v. The Bible because OH, Dwight, and pretty much the entire Pam/Toby section because I'm not so secretly starting to love them together. I'm just in awe of how good this was!