ext_75657 ([identity profile] mayonegg.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2007-02-01 02:28 am (UTC)

This is terrific! All of you characterizations are spot on, especially Gil and Michael...and Jan, and Angela. And Kevin. Yes.

I liked how you made Gil soft, compared to Oscar's pent up anger. And how Oscar totally weakens when he's with Gil.

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