ext_46794 ([identity profile] honey-wheeler.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2006-11-11 06:47 pm (UTC)

It occurs to her all at once that maybe he’ll cry. The notion is so horrible and so likely that she refuses to let herself entertain it.

Hee, sometimes Jan wants to push the fast forward when it gets too painful to watch Michael, JUST LIKE THE REST OF US!

You really conveyed the way Jan's equally horrified and fascinated by Michael here. Nicely done.

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