ext_12659 ([identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2005-07-01 08:06 am (UTC)

Ouch. And very realistic. I appreciate all the details, like this:

He’d stared up at her, wordless, pathetic, and the weakness had infuriated her.

So Irina. And:

“You did well with this man, Irina,” she’d said, fingers twisting through her sister’s hair as though they were still children.

Ah, the twistednes that was Elena.

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