ext_12659 ([identity profile] selenak.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2005-04-25 05:15 am (UTC)

Oh, so very, very good. Loved details such as Jack still differentiating between Laura and Irina, his entire pov of Nadia, and then, on Sydney:

Listening to her footsteps, he cannot help but recognize that she has gone unsaved.

Ouch. Jack angsting about his daughter is as sharp and painful as ever.

Naturally, I adored "She truly is her father's daughter, Jack" and Jack's reaction, as well as: He turns, inexplicably missing Laura, or perhaps Irina, and Arvin is watching them with a mild sort of interest.

This train of thought cannot be pursued. The repercussions are unimaginable. Jack knows this.


Ah, the twistedness of Sloane's involvement with the Bristow clan...

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