First of all, I'm soooo sorry for the delayed feedback. I read this right before I went to my friend's birthday party after a hard day at work and it cheered me up IMMENSELY. It also inspired me to continue working on my Jaime/Brienne vid and then I had to leave and I'm just reeally bad with giving feedback if it's not in the moment especially the long detailed kind that this fic definitely deserves (seriously I'm in awe here). But I LOOOOOVE this fic, it is seriously the fic of my dreams and I wish it could last forever, it's just that good. I mean BANTERING SPIES!! What could be better? And you have the characters nailed SPOT ON. They're just perfect.
I looove that they were infiltrating Dany's place of all places. I loove Brienne's glares at him and oh man, the number of times her doing that kind of thing to him just had me breaking out grinning is ridiculous. I mean, the vague distrust of her sparkly purse! Heee. Fistbump!!! OMG have I mentioned how much I love Jaime. He'd totally do it too! You've felt my abs omg I can die in piece now, he's such a kid to make her do it. I love how even the decorations are perfect, I mean dragon bookends c'mon.
KISSING OMG YAY!!! Never letting her down ftw!! Ohhh Jaime, this is so great. Jorah!! And Jaime liiiikes looking at her of course. Peaches lol, oh man that dialogue is so him. And the Gay Boss and the jackass!! Perfect book references including the Cersei one. Also I am so imagining Jaime putting his hand up to high five Jorah after the "Am I right?" while Jorah just glares (much like Brienne heh…hmm new ship for me? Jaime = little black dress for me). Handholding!! Fistbumping is unprofessional lol, oh Brienne. That did cross my mind! Aww they're just so cute and on the same wavelength. Awww the joke thing, I love how you just inserted this moment of pure emotional honestly and vulnerability among bantering and it totally works.
Punching his colleagues!!! Awww oh Jaime. He saved her from a bear! omgsomuchlove. I love them arguing about it. And I only save beauties!!! Awwwwwww smiling too. She takes him to McDonalds!! Seducing yessss. And sharing a McFlurry! HOW ATE THEY SO CUTE??? I seriously may die from their cuteness. Thank you sooooooooo much for this, it really is perfect :D And if you want to write an epic spy fic for them, I am so, SO down with that ;)
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I looove that they were infiltrating Dany's place of all places. I loove Brienne's glares at him and oh man, the number of times her doing that kind of thing to him just had me breaking out grinning is ridiculous. I mean, the vague distrust of her sparkly purse! Heee. Fistbump!!! OMG have I mentioned how much I love Jaime. He'd totally do it too! You've felt my abs omg I can die in piece now, he's such a kid to make her do it. I love how even the decorations are perfect, I mean dragon bookends c'mon.
KISSING OMG YAY!!! Never letting her down ftw!! Ohhh Jaime, this is so great. Jorah!! And Jaime liiiikes looking at her of course. Peaches lol, oh man that dialogue is so him. And the Gay Boss and the jackass!! Perfect book references including the Cersei one. Also I am so imagining Jaime putting his hand up to high five Jorah after the "Am I right?" while Jorah just glares (much like Brienne heh…hmm new ship for me? Jaime = little black dress for me). Handholding!! Fistbumping is unprofessional lol, oh Brienne. That did cross my mind! Aww they're just so cute and on the same wavelength. Awww the joke thing, I love how you just inserted this moment of pure emotional honestly and vulnerability among bantering and it totally works.
Punching his colleagues!!! Awww oh Jaime. He saved her from a bear! omgsomuchlove. I love them arguing about it. And I only save beauties!!! Awwwwwww smiling too. She takes him to McDonalds!! Seducing yessss. And sharing a McFlurry! HOW ATE THEY SO CUTE??? I seriously may die from their cuteness. Thank you sooooooooo much for this, it really is perfect :D And if you want to write an epic spy fic for them, I am so, SO down with that ;)