dollsome | ladyloves! - a f/f comment ficathon

I have been wanting to do this for awhile, so, LET'S.

ladyloves!

a f/f comment ficathon

Rules
(Shamelessly copy/pasted from a past comment ficathon, because I am really bad at rules)
+ Pairings requested shall be female/female (... duh)
+ One prompt per comment, and please format your comment along the lines of: "[Fandom] - [Pairing] - [Prompt]." Feel free to submit as many prompt-comments as you'd like. The more the better!
+ If you respond to a prompt, include the pairing and a title at the top of your comment.
+ If your fic's got an R/NC-17 rating, please indicate as much in the comment subject line as well.
+ Spread the word!--

The Vampire Diaries - Caroline/Rebekah - we'll paint this city red by morning by

magisterequitum

Downton Abbey - Mary/Lavinia - and our feelings prey upon us by

dollsome

Game of Thrones - Sansa/Shae - the night is dark by

laeria

The Vampire Diaries - Rebekah/Tatia, Rebekah/Elena - to echo out of tune by

pocochina

Don't Trust The B In Apartment 23 - Chloe/June - mystery left by

portions_forfox

Parks & Rec - Ann/April - evolution takes its toll by

portions_forfox

Doctor Who - Amy/Martha - wound up in a movie with no story by

portions_forfox

The Hour - Bel/Lix - wants us to be happy by

mapsounds

Skins - Mini/Liv - sour in the summer heat by

perfectlystill

Once Upon A Time - Regina/Emma - You caught me lingering by

buffied

Gilmore Girls - Rory/Paris - thus with(out) a kiss by

dollsome

Pretty Little Liars - Emily/Hanna - do you still keep pictures of old girlfriends by

perfectlystill

The Vampire Diaries - Caroline/Rebekah/Katherine/Elena - No Pedestals Are Quite This High by

rosaxx50

Revenge - Amanda/Emily - the beast you've made of me by

perfectlystill

Harry Potter - Ginny/Luna - i'm living in an age that calls darkness light by

theviolonist

Skins - Effy/Pandora - vulnerable by

rumpledlinen

Don't Trust The B In Apartment 23 - Chloe/June - Cold Food, Warm Champagne by

fandomnerd

Skins - Michelle/Jal - off chance with a poster of a girl by

portions_forfox

Pretty Little Liars/Veronica Mars - Alison DiLaurentis/Lilly Kane - we have lived so long (and hardly at all) by

immortality

True Love - Karen/Holly - The Unpure by

thisisagift

The Avengers - Natasha/Sif - The tangle of webs by

thisisagift

Pretty Little Liars - Alison/Emily - there is no happiness like mine by

immortality

Pretty Little Liars - Alison/Emily - there's still a part of me left for you by

immortality

Downton Abbey - Cora/Sarah - you burned whilst I cried by

amandiers

Once Upon A Time - Evil Queen/Red + Regina/Ruby - New Skins by

thisisagift

Black Swan - Nina/Lily - dance my way under the wires (into your wired heart) by

theviolonist

Nikita - Alex/Nikita - When You Can Hold Me Together by

jessicaqueen

Doctor Who - Rose/Martha - wood and clay by

portions_forfox

True Blood - Sookie/Pam - Blood Promise by

femme_slash_fan

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off chance with a poster of a girl ; ( 2 / 2 )

It's not as though this story's any new.

Jal waits by the door. Her father is silent for once. Nods to her. Heads up the stairs.

It's raining.

Chel drags her feet up the stairs, falls into bed. Watches the rain, and cries. She's not making sense—or at least, less sense than usual—and as Jal tugs her head into her lap she can hear, It's different, it's different, it's different this time, like a song, like one of Anwar's prayers.

"Wha's that?" Jal asks her, and Michelle chokes out a sob.

"He came to my house," she tells Jal. "He stood at my door," she tells Jal. "He told me he loved me, and I said no."

Good, Jal thinks, but there are too many reasons for the fleeting word, too many threads she can't take care to untangle. She's never been a patient one, Jal.

"Oh, Chel," she says instead.

"I miss him," Chel hums, and it rings more true than any of her other words, more true than I love him, in fact.

"I know, I know you do," Jal murmurs. Runs a finger through a ringlet curl.

Chel shifts her head, nose pressing into Jal's stomach. "I'm a shit friend," she breathes, eyes wet. "I am."

Jal should probably say You're not, because that's the type of thing she always says in these situations, but instead she finds a laugh bubbling up inside of her, absurd, unstoppable. "You kind of are," she agrees, and then the laugh cuts out between her teeth, and Michelle's shaking in her lap, a chuckle.

It dies away. The rain beats on against the window.

"I miss him" again.

"I know."

Michelle shifts.

Tilts her head away from Jal's stomach.

Eyes are pink, puffy, swollen.

She's still beautiful. It's not really fair.

"I want you," Chel says, "to kiss me," so Jal leans down and kisses her, lips chaste and closed against Chel's mouth. Her face is wet, from the rain, and from tears, and from lip gloss.

Jal pulls away.

"I miss him."

"I know."

"Kiss me again."

And this time there's Chel's jaw slanting open beneath the press of her lips, and the soft, wet inside of Chel's mouth, and Chel's tongue gliding lazily into the curve of Jal's cheek.

And Chel's hand snaking into the back of Jal's hair, and Chel's chest arching upward into Jal, an inhalation, and Chel's tiny, open moan—

(We should stop, Jal thinks she ought to say, but it's different, it's different, it's different this time.)

Chel's fingers curling around the hem of Jal's shirt, and Chel's palms brushing Jal's ribs as she pulls the shirt up over her shoulders, and the heat of Chel's everything as she straddles Jal's hips.

And the pulse of Chel's finger inside of her, and the bite of Chel's words when she tells her Come on, come for me Jal, just fucking come, and the sight of Jal's own hand pushing down in Chel's hair, and Chel bends at the touch, for once, for once.

This is amazing! I love how you managed to show how unbalanced their relationship is, while still getting across that they do love each other, even if Michelle sucks at showing it sometimes.

Thanks for filling!

Yeah, thank you! Like I mentioned, I'm just now getting into Skins, and of course my favorite character - Jal - is one of the most underappreciated. But I love her!

lol, I get that. Michelle is my favourite and she isn't one people seem to adore either.

LOVE IT :)

She's still beautiful. It's not really fair.

Oh Jal <3

Come on, come for me Jal, just fucking come

That sounds so much like Michele, it's beautiful :)

Also, great title btw.

thanks! ah, you know jal. i love that gal. and michelle too.

thanks! i love metric & emily haines & obviously rilo kiley & jenny lewis too. i end up with a lot of titles from their songs, lol.

and i love that i'm seeing you comment on my stuff in like, three different places today! i'm so flattered tbh.

I'm an experienced stalker :D

LOL. Apparently so am I because I just actively went looking for fic by you and read your Jess/Rory at stainofmylove's ficathon a while back and creyed.

She wants to, so she kisses him. (It sounds like a beginning, but it's not, it's not a
beginning, she is already in the middle and gasping for air and her head spinning with Jess
Rory Dean Jess Dean Jess, Jess.)

OH MY YOU <3 I am totally friending you, like now :D

that is, if you don't mind?

pssh, of course i don't mind, i've friended you right back!

This is absolutely perfect. "...unless you count the rain. Always the rain." The imagery there is wonderful. I also love how their kisses first intermixed with all the "I miss him"s and "I know"s and then gradually growing to something between just them. Really nice work. :)

Thank you so much!

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