ext_70667 ([identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_thirty2flavors/) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2012-06-29 05:35 am (UTC)

Omg someone wrote it! Sorry it took me a little to notice, I didn't have notifications for this post + had forgotten to check.

I liked this! I really liked the exploration of Holly's guilt and conflicting emotion, because it's something I think we didn't see quite enough of in the episode due to it being so short. So I liked that you explored a bit of that here, how she feels guilty for what she's doing and knows that as an authority figure for Karen she should resist but can't. I also liked the detail about how she's tired of forbidden relationships, since her previous relationship was with a married man; it's a detail I hadn't really noticed or thought about when I watched the show but I think it's a good one.

Thank you!

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