http://portions-forfox.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] portions-forfox.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2012-06-26 01:07 am (UTC)

Oooooooooh god this is so good.

I love that every line is really important, and well-articulated, and heavy, you know?

"You should kiss me now," Luna says, her fingers laced in her lap. The moonlight shines behind her and makes her glow, cold and delicate. Ginny hadn't noticed the print of her dress. Flowers. Daffodils. I just love the ending of that phrase, the choppy Flowers. Daffodils. That's so very Luna, and very like Ginny to notice.

"Dawn isn't my favorite season," she said to Ginny once, quietly and like a confidence, just before she slid her fingers into Ginny and made her moan. This is the type of thing I can just hear Luna saying in my head, and a really vivid image, too.

A;DKSLFJS I LOVED IT

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