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dollsome ([personal profile] dollsome) wrote2012-03-26 02:27 pm

the mary & lavinia comment ficathon



a.k.a. the [livejournal.com profile] oltha_heri and [livejournal.com profile] oliveoyl and i get an excuse to post lots of prompts ficathon


It's a legit thing, okay! The world needs all the Mary/Lavinia adventures.

rules (?)
+ One prompt per comment. Feel free to submit as many prompt-comments as you'd like. The more the better! If you'd prefer platonic fic to shippy fic, just specify that in your comment.

+ If you respond to a prompt, include a title in the subject line of your comment if you are using a lj layout that has subject lines. If you're not, please put that same information at the top of your comment.

+ Okay, that's as authoritative as I feel like being right now!

+ Spread the word:




Masterlist of Responses
My dear, my dear, it is not so dreadful here by [livejournal.com profile] oltha_heri - You reach out a hand, slowly oh so slowly you inch closer to the porcelain skin of her wrist, and then dark eyes are fixed on you.

with grace in all she offers by [livejournal.com profile] dollsome - You are Lady Mary Crawley. Cold and careful, soulless and heartless. Selfish. Thorn-sharp to those who would stand in your way.

throw over your man, i say, and come by [livejournal.com profile] screamlet - "Lavinia, what about London?" Matthew asks as he clasps my hands.

it's you season by [livejournal.com profile] dollsome - "It's tradition," Mary says. "It's barbaric," Lavinia says.

Scandals Bear No Meaning by [livejournal.com profile] femme_slash_fan (crossover with Upstairs/Downstairs) - The fact that Agnes Holland had stood by her good friend and, for the moment, only company at home, had meant a lot to Blanche Mottershead.

The Truth Will Out by [livejournal.com profile] femme_slash_fan - Lavinia had come to Mary’s side when she called, gently taking her hand, feeling the girl’s trembles and gently squeezing her hand.

[identity profile] oltha_heri.livejournal.com 2012-03-26 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Mary has no book with her tonight. Mary does not fall to bed beside you when you pat the coverlet. Mary does not smile tonight. You are worried. You are as worried as when you learnt about Matthew, because this is Mary and things do not disturb her and yet she stands there uncertain and sad before you. You think the world must've ended for Mary to be so. But you don't know what to say. You reach your hand out, reach out to enclose the pale bare shoulders that seem too burdened. You reach out- and she is gone.

***

Perhaps it was a dream you think. Without her warm weight beside you, you could easily be convinced all of her nocturnal appearances were a dream. But last night there was no warm weight. You feel a chill through all the day.

It gets worse and she does not come that night either.

***

Matthew is the one who tells you. Mary is exposed. Mary is unvirtuous, there is disappointment when he tries to tell her. Tries not to offend her sensibilities. But she understands.

He is angry when he tells her how it all came out. He is angry at Carlisle for apparently blackmailing her.

Lavinia is not angry, for she is not thinking of Carlisle. Lavinia is worried, and empathetic, and needs to see her. But this is not the time for that, and so you wait.

You wait until night falls, and Matthew leaves, and the house quiets.

You are stronger, and though not quite prepared for stairs yet you are determined to reach the hall of Mary's room. With legs shaking from disuse and a hand on the wall to balance you slowly remember the path to Mary's room.

You have been there once, the first night you were ill Mary was there to care for you. You will return the favour.

When you finally reach her room you do not hesitate. She starts when she sees you, but in a second she is up reprimanding you for leaving bed and she is there with an arm around your waist to support you. When the comfort of her bed is under you and you have a minute to recover she begins to withdraw.

You hold on.

You hold on to one pale bare shoulder, you hold on to one thin, fragile wrist, your thumb moving over the soft vulnerable skin over her veins.

She is tense under your fingers, and you wonder if this was the bed, it must be the bed, where that man had died. You shake at the weight with which she has been living. You pull her back, without losing your grip on her manage to move back on this large bed that has had sex and death where it was only supposed to hold a young lady. But you are not her bed, and there is nothing predestined about who you hold but your choice, so for tonight you hold on, her tears soaking through your night gown.

You will not let go.

[identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com 2012-03-27 12:12 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my God, this is beautiful and so intense and lovely; it has that sort of feverish, delirious, drifting air that is so exactly right for Lavinia's perspective in this circumstance, and I just love how vivid Mary is, and how strong Lavinia is, the way it contrasts with her current physical weakness, and how Mary brings that strength out in her, and augh, augh, augh, you have to write about them forever!

And, here, these are my notes I had to take while I read because I kept getting too overwhelmed not to caps lock at you:

It is not large. It does not rival the brightness of the sun that filters through the window, it barely shows her teeth; but she is Mary and you would not expect anything more, not for you. And then Mary shifts closer in her chair. You see her eyes. They are warm. Like a hot water bottle to curl against in the middle of January; like a fire to read against; like coming home from a downpour.

YOU HAVE BLOODY KILLED ME.

Her voice carries you to Verona, to Crete, to India, to the lost palace of Kubla Kahn. But she is beside you as you dream and so you are not afraid.

LIKE I'M REALLY DEAD FROM BEAUTY.

No, you have a feeling it is not what one would say.

OH, LAVINIA, I LOVE YOU.

With legs shaking from disuse and a hand on the wall to balance you slowly remember the path to Mary's room.

MY HEART.

That whole last paragraph! That last line! I just! AM DEAD.

[identity profile] oltha_heri.livejournal.com 2012-03-27 12:15 am (UTC)(link)
I AM SO GLAD YOU LOVED IT! I was worried it was too much, but you've made me feel better.

And just, augh, the number of stories I have unfinished on my computer about Mary reading to Lavinia while sick is ridiculous. There is one with a lot of Twelfth Night references that if I ever finish will be about how Viola and Olivia's epic love enlighten Mary and Lavinia to their epic love.

[identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com 2012-03-27 01:59 am (UTC)(link)
There is one with a lot of Twelfth Night references that if I ever finish will be about how Viola and Olivia's epic love enlighten Mary and Lavinia to their epic love.

DID I EVER TELL YOU YOU'RE MY HEEEEROOOOOOOO

[identity profile] oltha_heri.livejournal.com 2012-03-27 02:01 am (UTC)(link)
Shush woman I'm reading your "It's you season." WHEREIN YOU BECOME MY HEEEEROOOOOOO!

[identity profile] dollsome.livejournal.com 2012-03-27 06:19 pm (UTC)(link)
EVERYBODY IS EVERYBODY'S HERO!!!!!

QUESTION! Does this work of beauty have a title? For the masterlist I am just putting the prompt as the title for now, but let me know, yo!

[identity profile] oltha_heri.livejournal.com 2012-03-27 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Let's go with: "My dear, my dear, it is not so dreadful here."
ext_270953: (Xena)

[identity profile] analise010.livejournal.com 2012-03-27 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
This is perfect. I never really liked Lavinia in DA (I wanted to cut her most of the time), but you really made me love and appreciate her here.

[identity profile] oltha_heri.livejournal.com 2012-03-27 02:23 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad I could make you appreciate her here!

[identity profile] shoppermania.livejournal.com 2012-03-27 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is really really very lovely!!!

[identity profile] oliveoyl.livejournal.com 2012-03-28 03:57 am (UTC)(link)
OH MY GODDDDDD I love this and it is beautiful. The end, where she finds her way to Mary's room, is just way too much for me. YOU WILL NOT LET GO. aaaaaaaaaaaaaagh!!!! And I also enjoy how Matthew is handled here, both sweet and obtuse, just how I like him.