trialia: Ziva David (Cote de Pablo), head down, hair wind-streamed, eyes almost closed. (who] river - smile over shoulder)
Tria ([personal profile] trialia) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2011-09-03 08:05 am (UTC)

Hehe, you're welcome. After my first reaction - which WAS pure delight, I promise you! - I still really love this fic the second time around.

Your Amy is just perfect, and I adore the little details about River like her heading straight for the tea cupboard without realising what it might mean to Amy - and I always love Rory when he's done right, and you definitely did him right. Though that sounds wrong. *G*

Just one thing - I'm guessing you're American or Canadian? "What To Expect When You're Expecting" isn't really a British thing. Though that line is great. River really is a fabulous badass :)

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