This is absolutely wonderful. It's so very Amy--sad but tough as nails, and never giving up or losing her sense of humor. I love how you highlight the similarities between her and River. River being the Ponds' daughter seemed really random, but you make it fit so well. You also have a very subtle touch that works very well--River being quietly touched to realize the tea's been for her all these years, or Amy dropping the peas and remembering losing Melody.

I am confused about the conversation Rory and River have about university, though. Are you saying they helped pay Mels' way in school? And why does Rory say how considerate they are, and ask about River's schooling?