ext_11417 ([identity profile] whirligigged.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2011-06-11 12:47 pm (UTC)

OH MY DJASFA; MY FAVORITE PART WAS EVERYTHING.

I don't understand how your voice chameleons so well based on what fandom and character you are writing, despite your having such a lovely distinctive voice of your own in your blog posts as well. HER LIP GLOSS TASTES FRUITY AND ALLITERATIVE. ARE YOU AWARE THERE IS GAY MARRIAGE IN MASSACHUSETTS AND YOU COULD TOTALLY COME HERE AND MARRY ME? LOOK, I'M JUST PUTTING IT OUT THERE. I really admire how sneaky you were about Jeff and Annie's first kiss, which both counts and doesn't count, as well being as SUCH a thing that would happen in this show.

You encapsulated Merlin and Arthur's love for each other here. You took the lovely strategy the show has of sneaking up on me with these heart-clutching moments where Merlin cries while Arthur isn't looking, and then later Merlin and Arthur declare their love while trying their best not to look like total saps, which involves a lot of Merlin being sassy and Arthur trying to be both sassy and manly, and it is all to cover up all the honesty going on and somehow by the end of the day they have both managed to express to the other how much he is valued. Only you brought it a step up by showing us Merlin's HEARTBREAKING INTERNAL MONOLOGUE OH MY GOD, (he was sure and wasn't; that's how it always is, with them, with destiny)--I am actually tearing up--and by giving us True Love's Kiss interpreted through the lens of Merlin and Arthur's particular dynamic.

I haven't read much Glee fic ever, but I have a feeling you are somewhat unique in getting Brittany this well, the way her "dumbness" has turned more into a lack of hangups (LORD TUBBINGTON IN HIS TEENAGE YEARS, YOU ARE KILLING MEEE), the way she sees things as they are, the way she loves the people in her life so well. You made her point of view, which could have been limiting, so frank in her observations about Santana that it felt more telling, and basically you are a perfect human being and I love you for all three of these fics omg.

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