very good, very, very good. they are so in character and when everybody else comes in it reads like if it was a for real episode. Jeff/Annie is love and you write them perfectly, but I have to say this:

"that she’ll come down here, a festival of righteous fury and impeccably tailored lumberjack shirts that are supposed to convey a sense of ‘Check me out, I’m a tomboy and I don’t care how I look but I still look awesome"

was sagvdfgdgfdg! BRTTA! SHE IS MY FAVORITE AND THIS WAS HER TO A T!