ext_9157 ([identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2010-08-01 12:34 pm (UTC)

This was amazing.

I was literally laughing out loud in places.

Jeff stares at her. (Oh, God, oh, God, he thinks. She’s going to kill me. Maybe with this eraser. He’s freaked for like a fraction in a second until he realizes, no, that feeling is actually relief. Please, put him out of his misery.)

This was one of those places.

I adored the pov shifts and you totally nailed how well Jeff and Annie know each other.

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