ext_56524 ([identity profile] firthgal.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dollsome 2010-08-01 04:22 am (UTC)

Oh, you! Continuing to delight me with your delightfully delightful words! Dude, this was fantastic. I loved the jumping between Jeff and Annie's brains, particularly the dashy bits (sorry, I can't think of a better way to describe that, hopefully you know what I'm talking about). Annie's fixation on her frugal purchase of the index cards was both hilarious and spot-on, and somehow you made buying a pencil case look like the most gallant romantic gesture known to man (I may have cooed a little?), and Jeff's excitement about showing her the pencil case was pretty much the cutest thing ever, and then him randomly bursting out with "WE KISSED" and promptly freaking about it was awesome, and I love how this and Annie's reaction to it actually solved their dilemma in this beautifully understated way that was just so very them. And Jeff loving the way Annie listens! And Jeff being ashamed of himself for noticing every little detail about her sundress! And Annie resenting her new unprepared, backpackless self! Basically, I freaking loved your take on Annie in this because you captured her high strung super adorableness exactly as it is on the show, and Jeff was so beautifully Jeff with his jaded nature trying to feud with his secret sappy nature. Also, Britta's rant on Twilight was A+. And Pierce's excitement about his new penis case! Ahahahahahaha, oh, Pierce. AND TROY AND ABED.

This fic was absolute perfection, is what I'm trying to say.

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