I don't think I've ever read a GG fic where the dialogue was so dead on! This was amazing - including the little things like sneaking mango & taking the deliciousness to the grave or texting Rory to tell her used a big word. I LOVED this - I am in awe of your ability to capture their voices. And of COURSE, Luke caves. Luke always caves. =) Didn't know he was such a health nut, though.