Seconds this! I'm convinced that it is what turns Bella on. The whole sex tangled up in death thing. Sure she loved Jacob when he was human, but he first became sexually desirable to her when he turned into a big, wild werewolf who could snap her spine like a twig if he wanted.

Great narrative voice, I'm sure we can all recognise ourselves in this bella voice, rather than the eternally morose woe is me girl.

Oh and I loved how you included Bella's love for classic litteratur in the whole story, but again give it an ironic twist. Miss Havisham is awesome!