We aren’t even, like, you work-ask me for my number and I work-give you a fake one. Okay? Totally random but this line has me shipping Ivy and Judith, and you know that seems awesome, so go you for inspiring my mind!
Boyd’s my man-friend. My special man-migo. If he’s gonna put his close-standy gazey whatever with the Phantom before our fine bromance, then yeah, I’m gonna take some umbrage. How can you write Topher SO WELL?! The combination of extra "y"s and Joss speak with a word like umbrage. Perfect.
"Mommy and Daddy Dollhouse, right there." Totally my new nickname for them.
Strangulation. Kinky. You know what, I bet Mr. and Mrs. D-D could get behind that. (Would they hyphenate, do you think? Nah. Dom would probably just take DeWitt's last name.) First, they totally had sex on the couch in Epitaph One because of this line. Second, he would so take her last name. And then people would be confused as to what to call him, and he would revel in that, because haha, the inferiority of others to he and his boss-lady-love.
I’m just sayin’. They torture a lot of people, and it never really seems to bum them out. In fact, remember when that security grunt got plastered and mentioned the ol’ DHizzle to one of his drinking buddies? Dom dragged him up to the office, DeWitt shut the door, Judith reported some serious grade-A agonized screaming from within – and afterwards they were both in a weirdly good mood. I just love this whole thing. I mean obviously torturing equating to happiness in the D/D world is you know, amazing but then how you wrote the rest of that, awesome.
You know what’s gross? How closed-minded you are. Also: these chips. This is like eating cardboard flavored with a hint of crippling despair. Why are you doing this to me? YOUR TOPHER IS SO TOPHER
"Do you really need a reminder of what happens when DeWitt gets upset?" “You maim, she swoons?” I don't know what is more amazing about this exchange that Laurence would cooly remind everyone of how AWE INSPIRING AND AMAZING and vaguely evil his boss-lady-love is or Topher's response of perfection AND TRUTH!
I love where Dominic is talking to Ivy, and he is just so confused, and both of them just go on ignoring his confusion. No wonder Dominic has not so latent violent tendencies towards Topher and Ivy.
Dominic ushers Tango out. He’s so distracted that he almost doesn’t stop her from flirtatiously fondling his tie (“You know the only thing I love more than a man in a suit?” she purrs, while Dominic ponders exactly what would drive someone to work-marry him to Adelle DeWitt. Yeah, he’s a man and she’s a woman, but it’s not like this is elementary school, so that shouldn’t exactly be a basis for— “A man out of a suit.”) until it’s too late. Fortunately, his reflexes are good. He really likes this tie. I have no idea where to start with this paragraph because IT IS SO PERFECT!!!!!! Doll's hitting on Dominic, hilarious. Him liking his tie, hilarious and in character. "Fortunately, his reflexes are good." Great simple line and position within the narration. And Tango's chat up line so broken up by Dominic going Adelle, Adelle, me and Adelle, Adelle.
Save for perhaps your oversensitivity on the matter. Pointing that out just seems in bad taste. Oh, burned. And so in character.
the threat of it is cheerfully apparent Fantastic line with the contrast between threat and cheerfully, and also perfect because I perfectly recall that expression on Olivia Williams face.
Topher’s voice asks in his head. Dominic tells it to shut the hell up. Being related to Topher even slightly, it doesn’t listen. And continues, relentlessly, to annoy him. I love Dom's head. I just do, he is snarky and amusing and just kind of fun to read. ...when not making one cry.
“Topher thinks we’re … work married. It’s irrelevant. You were saying?” I love that he tells her, I think it kind of says something awesome about their relationship.
AND JUST ADELLE! She was so scarily perfect and awesome and having powerful restraint if she was not doing more with her head of security.
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We aren’t even, like, you work-ask me for my number and I work-give you a fake one. Okay?
Totally random but this line has me shipping Ivy and Judith, and you know that seems awesome, so go you for inspiring my mind!
Boyd’s my man-friend. My special man-migo. If he’s gonna put his close-standy gazey whatever with the Phantom before our fine bromance, then yeah, I’m gonna take some umbrage.
How can you write Topher SO WELL?! The combination of extra "y"s and Joss speak with a word like umbrage. Perfect.
"Mommy and Daddy Dollhouse, right there."
Totally my new nickname for them.
Strangulation. Kinky. You know what, I bet Mr. and Mrs. D-D could get behind that. (Would they hyphenate, do you think? Nah. Dom would probably just take DeWitt's last name.)
First, they totally had sex on the couch in Epitaph One because of this line. Second, he would so take her last name. And then people would be confused as to what to call him, and he would revel in that, because haha, the inferiority of others to he and his boss-lady-love.
I’m just sayin’. They torture a lot of people, and it never really seems to bum them out. In fact, remember when that security grunt got plastered and mentioned the ol’ DHizzle to one of his drinking buddies? Dom dragged him up to the office, DeWitt shut the door, Judith reported some serious grade-A agonized screaming from within – and afterwards they were both in a weirdly good mood.
I just love this whole thing. I mean obviously torturing equating to happiness in the D/D world is you know, amazing but then how you wrote the rest of that, awesome.
You know what’s gross? How closed-minded you are. Also: these chips. This is like eating cardboard flavored with a hint of crippling despair. Why are you doing this to me?
YOUR TOPHER IS SO TOPHER
"Do you really need a reminder of what happens when DeWitt gets upset?"
“You maim, she swoons?”
I don't know what is more amazing about this exchange that Laurence would cooly remind everyone of how AWE INSPIRING AND AMAZING and vaguely evil his boss
-lady-loveis or Topher's response of perfection AND TRUTH!I love where Dominic is talking to Ivy, and he is just so confused, and both of them just go on ignoring his confusion. No wonder Dominic has not so latent violent tendencies towards Topher and Ivy.
Dominic ushers Tango out. He’s so distracted that he almost doesn’t stop her from flirtatiously fondling his tie (“You know the only thing I love more than a man in a suit?” she purrs, while Dominic ponders exactly what would drive someone to work-marry him to Adelle DeWitt. Yeah, he’s a man and she’s a woman, but it’s not like this is elementary school, so that shouldn’t exactly be a basis for— “A man out of a suit.”) until it’s too late. Fortunately, his reflexes are good. He really likes this tie.
I have no idea where to start with this paragraph because IT IS SO PERFECT!!!!!! Doll's hitting on Dominic, hilarious. Him liking his tie, hilarious and in character. "Fortunately, his reflexes are good." Great simple line and position within the narration. And Tango's chat up line so broken up by Dominic going Adelle, Adelle, me and Adelle, Adelle.
Save for perhaps your oversensitivity on the matter. Pointing that out just seems in bad taste.
Oh, burned. And so in character.
the threat of it is cheerfully apparent
Fantastic line with the contrast between threat and cheerfully, and also perfect because I perfectly recall that expression on Olivia Williams face.
Topher’s voice asks in his head. Dominic tells it to shut the hell up. Being related to Topher even slightly, it doesn’t listen. And continues, relentlessly, to annoy him.
I love Dom's head. I just do, he is snarky and amusing and just kind of fun to read. ...when not making one cry.
“Topher thinks we’re … work married. It’s irrelevant. You were saying?”
I love that he tells her, I think it kind of says something awesome about their relationship.
AND JUST ADELLE! She was so scarily perfect and awesome and having powerful restraint if she was not doing more with her head of security.